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Okay, so after looking at the polls and the comments you guys have left me, I've decided to compromise and put both chapter links and the entire story into 1 page. It'll take a bit of time before the rest of the books are condensed into 1 page, but I'll try to do them ASAP.

(15/6/2012)

Saturday, 8 October 2011

Book 3: Rule C – The Twelve Holy Knights’ Third Shared Rule: “No matter how lame/foolish the Sun Knight looks, never ever provoke his wrath.”

*Disclaimer note: This is merely a translation of the original Chinese version. I do not claim any part in the creation of the original story.


 

Royal Palace of Moon Orchid

"Aahhhhhhh!!!!!"

An ear-piercing scream pierced through the quiet night, coming from Princess Alice's room.

Princess Ann and a group of knights burst into Princess Alice's room, but was greeted with the sight of her royal highness crouched on the ground, sobbing and burying her face in her hands. When she heard them burst into her room, she shrieked in a panicked tone, "Get out! All of you get out!!"

The knights looked at each other in confusion, but upon seeing no one else in the room, they turned to look at Princess Ann who nodded her head, dismissing them.

Ann walked over to her distressed sister's side and asked carefully, "Sis, what's wrong? Was it a spider?"

Alice just shook her head, not saying a word.

Ann grew more worried and said, "I'll go and get someone--"

"Don't go!" Alice hurriedly stopped her sister.

Ann paused. 'Don't do this, don't do that. Just what was wrong with her?'

"Sis, you're really worrying me like this," she said exasperatedly. "No matter what it is you have to tell me so I can help you."

Alice slowly lowered her hands and looked up, but upon seeing her sister's stunned face, she burst into tears again and started wailing.

Ann had a strange expression on her face and she asked in bewilderment, "Sister, your face…… why is it so dark? Wasn't it just fine this morning?"

"I had just finished wiping off my facial mask, when I looked at myself in the mirror and saw my face and screamed…… My skin……" she sobbed.

'Cheh! So it's just this little problem?' Even though her face had turned darker, it wasn't that bad. Ann looked at her sister, not knowing whether to cry or laugh. "I've told you not to play around with all those facial creams. You see now? Now you've gone and used some questionable cream and ruined your fair complexion!"

"How can it be?! I had carefully followed the instructions!"

Alice hurriedly showed her sister the instructions for whitening cream that the Sun Knight had given her.

"'Sand, Evening primrose petals, Root from a Venus-fly trap, Essence of Skunkweed, Yellow Ochre, Unripe Raspberries and black squid Ink. Ground all ingredients together before adding in ochre and ink. Heat up the mixture to 100 degree before applying to skin. Time it for about three hours before washing off,'" read Alice.

Staring down at the strange instructions, Ann could hardly believe her sister actually dared to apply them to her face. After a moment, her expression turned even stranger and she asked her sister carefully, "Sis, where did you say you got this from?"

Alice answered without trying to hide anything, "From the Sun Knight. His skin is so soft and smooth and fair, there shouldn't have been any problems!"

'I knew it……' Ann smiled wryly and said, "Sis, why don't you try piecing together all the capital letters?"

Realising that something was up, Alice quickly looked down and read out, "S E R V E S Y O U R I G H T…… 'Serves you right'! Aahhhh!!!"

The liche lost a body, Solerwaith had been beaten to an inch of his life, and now even she herself had not escaped his wrath……

Alice's screams continued to ring through the royal palace for three days and three nights.

"Sun Knight!! You shameless despicable bastard!!!"

~O~O~O~O~

One day, Leaf carefully opened another letter from his dearly beloved Ann.


 

My Dear Leaf,

What you said to me about the Twelve Holy Knight's Third Shared Rule: 'No matter how lame/foolish the Sun Knight looks, never ever provoke his wrath' is so true! After continuously treating her face with various whitening creams for a month, my sister's skin has yet to recover even a little and is still as dark as ever.

Because her lover's injuries were mostly healed by the Sun Knight, he was able to return to the Church of Chaos and back here again to propose very quickly. However, my sister dared not appear before him before she regains her previously fair skin, and she dared not accept his proposal for the same reason. She is now crying in her room every day. But even if she were to cry every single day, her skin still won't turn fair again.

Ahh!! That Sun Knight is sooo scary! Leaf, make sure you don't provoke him! If you do, quickly escape and come over here. I'll ask Michael to hide you in the church of War. Maybe that way you could evade his wrath.

Praying that you never ever get on the Sun Knight's bad side,

Your Ann.


 

End of Third Volume


 

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RECIPE FOR DISASTER:

Sand,

Evening Primrose,

Root from a

Venus-fly trap,

Essense of

Skunkweed,


 

Yellow

Ochre,

Unripe


 

Raspberries and black squid

Ink

Ground all ingredients before adding in ochre and ink.

Heat up the mixture to 100 degree Celsius before applying to skin.

Time it for about three hours before washing off.

59 comments:

  1. Just out of curiousity, how did the 'recipe' work in orignal chinese? Did you have to tweak it alot?

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  2. I can't begin to describe how happy you have made me with this... THERE WERE TWO MISTAKES THOUGH

    1.'I knew it……' Alice smiled wryly and said, "Sis, why don't you try piecing together all the capital letters?" that Alice, is supposed to be Ann

    2.End of Second Volume

    you were probably waaaay to fired up, for not noticing this mistakes ^_^

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  3. Siguusa: Yeah. The original hidden message was deciphered from the first character (word) in each sentence and said something along the lines of "Serves you right for killing Leaf!"

    The original 'recipe' said "seaweed, scorched earth, mud, sand, green pepper and tuberose; Stir-fry and apply for three hours."

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  4. Anon: Oh, haha. thanks for pointing that out. And it was such obvious mistakes! Anyway, thanks, I've corrected them.

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  5. Thanks :D
    Must have been hard to translate that one 'cause of the recipies.
    Wahaha, Sun's so funny :D You just can't dislike him and his foolish side =3

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  6. That was so mean of him :D. He didn't make many friends in Moons Orchid.
    Thank you, thank you so very much for this surprise.

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  7. I’ll never get tired of telling you how awesome you are!!! Thank you so much for all these chaps!!! ^_^

    XD sun is so funny it really serves her! I’m so glad he took his revenge from her too. XD

    Noooo my Leaf, my Leaf! Even though my heart aches I hope she makes him happy…. sniff

    But… how the hell did this happened??!!!! How did that princess seduce my Leaf!!? Please somebody tell me!! *Sob sob*

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  8. thank you~~~~~~

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  9. O.o that was an amazingly fast upload!!!

    Thanks so much! XD
    I checked on the site earlier today and saw 2 chapters and was suprised and read them, then i check again and there's a side story! :)

    Cant wait for all the... mischievousness in Volume 4 XD (reading it via google translate)

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  10. Lol you are on a roll! Three chapters in two days? You're a goddesss. Somehow I'm not surprised that sun did that, I thought it was a little too easy how they were let off. Thank you for the hard work and translating the recipe, it must have been hard. :) Looking forward to V4 :)

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  11. Good job translating a joke like that - still amusing, and message wasn't lost. xD

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  12. lmao got to love sun
    glad he finally gotten revenge on one of them atleast
    pretty good job on translating the message lol

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  13. hahahahahaha xD sooooooo good!!! tnxs 4 the chaps, you are the best!!!

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  14. Thank you!!! Sun really gets his vengeance. :) I'm looking forward to the next volume.

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  15. Thanks for the new chapter ^.^

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  16. Just look like Sun, taking vengeance I mean.
    Thank you for translated this wonderful chapter ^O^

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  17. I love you!!!
    This is so funny! And you made it great even in english!!!

    But for gods sake! What a stupid princess... she heard the recipe once, and didn't even think about it? Serves her right!!!

    I'm not surprised that Ann loves Leaf after he put her in place - manly and loyal, and all... but how did this happen to Leaf???

    Can't wait for the continuation!! :D

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  18. Hahahahaha, that was awesome. XD I love how she didn't notice the recipe sounding so drastically different from what he described in the cave. XD Excellent chapter. <3

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  19. How does the princess actually not notice how wrong the recipe sounds? I mean like how many brain cells does she use?

    And as usual, amazing chapter!

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  20. Lol, wow. I'm really impressed you translated a joke like that! Although I have to agree, how can the princess not guess that that stuff will turn her dark? Haha

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  21. LEALLYNNN

    YOu are so greatt~~~~

    Is there anything i can help?
    Please tell me. I would really like to reply your kindness, like how you shower us with your kindness (translate SUN knight novel)

    Cheers

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  22. @applemania
    Typically if you want to help, either you join as a translator/proofreader or basically make a donation to support the group.

    That should help, as for the method, you decide

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  23. Thank you for translating yet another chapter for us.

    I've a question; Is the series still ongoing or the serialisation has already ended? If yes, then, how many volumes are out yet?

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  24. At the moment, there are 7 books in the Sun Knight series, with fans waiting eagerly for the last book.

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  25. thanks for the answer anynomous.
    Guess i am too ignorant for not knowing an obvious answer hahaha.

    Tbh i hope, princess ann likes Creus.

    I prefer that pairing rather then ann x leaf

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  26. just curious,
    if you've read 7 books so far.... will the Sun Knight ever restore his eyesight? There could be plenty of ways to do it though

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  27. Can I use your translations to translate them to Bulgarian? Please ... :)

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  28. The 8th book is the last one?? D: B-b-but that's not enough! D: eventhough so far all I've read is what you have translated, which is 3 volumes... but only 8 volumes? D:

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  29. In all 7 books, Sun has yet to restore his sight.

    Web: Sure, feel free to translate them. Just, I hope there would be a link back to my blog?

    Anon: Yes, there's only 8 volumes. But there's an extra volume about Neo and Alstair's meeting and adventures. And several mini side stories about the Twelve Holy Knights. :)
    Ans if that's not enough to satisfy you, think about all of Yu Wo's other books!

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  30. Yes of course! Here is the beginning:
    http://sunknightbg.blogspot.com/

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  31. So Lealyn, you have already read them? and are now going through them once again and translating them, that is some devotion, and i must say this series is very great, specially with his mage sight now, and even advanced magic in Wind, so OP

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  32. ^ don't forget that he excels in holy magic AND knows advanced (?) dark and necromancy magic, which should be nearly impossible.
    can he cast other elemental magic as well as wind, ice and water magic though?

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  33. Why don't you release your chapters on Mangaupdates.com?? This way you will attract more readers.

    http://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=51091

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  34. If and when you're done with all the main books will you please post the other stuff too? You have a link to the mini sidestories, but as far as I saw, there's only summaries there, not the stories themselves... - I really want to read all of them, and I love your translations!

    Does Yu Wo has anything in english besides this and 1/2 Prince? - I read both manhua and novel...

    Thanks!!!

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  35. For anon above: You can read eclipse hunter by Yu Wo at oddsquad.org ;D

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  36. Thank you sooooooooooo much!!!!!!! Seriously it MAKES MY DAY every time you post!!!!!!!

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  37. I wonder, does Ann have feelings for Leaf? o.O

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  38. Can I use your translation to translate this story in Spanish?? if I like how it translate and post it y will give credit to both you and the author and I will put a link to your translation and the the author. so can I?

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  39. Demon~: The only translations that I know of for Yu Wo's books are by odd squad, princerevolution, and me.

    Mizukihikari: There are at least two people that I know of who have asked to translate this into Spanish, perhaps you are interested in contacting them? They're Blacklily and Storyteller. But if you wish to work alone it's fine by me too.

    And yes, Ann does like Leaf. Why does everyone find that so hard to believe? Come on, Leaf's a GREAT guy!

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  40. Yeah, he is a great guy, but I still hope he doesn't like her back.

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  41. "Yeah, he is a great guy, but I still hope he doesn't like her back"

    I get the feeling! I think Leaf is too good for her, besides that made a lot of girls who love him feel slightly sad... Of the few good men out there, why did he have to like one who scorns our beloved Creus? Why?! *wimpers*

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  42. ^ i think it is even sadder (?) that only a handful people know of sun's awesomeness (intelligence and skills). and from those handful people, only a few know about both.

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  43. i think that its even even sadder that within those that know both there are less that love him, and now we have at least 3 people scared of him, who deem him as despicable...

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  44. Lealynn thanks, lol, I have seen some translation of this in Spanish but they over use sophisticated words and it feels like it takes out from the story since this is a very light tone story. I translated the prologue already and send it to my dad XD. Btw the only type of guy that could help be sun in real life are the Asian guys, they are slim, fair and I just, Photoshop one into having blue eyes and yellow hair yesterday when I was translating.

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  45. OMG! the speed of these is amazing! thanks for the hard work!

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  46. OMG!! I just stayed put for 1 month..then there are already tons of chapter!!! I luv u very much Lealyn!!! Hahaha...It made my worse nightmare disappear....I can\t wait for the next book....

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  47. Here is the Site, where I posted the prologue and the synopsis
    www.laleyendadelcaballerodelsol.blogspot.com

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  48. cannot wait for the next chapter D:~ {{Addiction}}

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  49. "i think that its even even sadder that within those that know both there are less that love him, and now we have at least 3 people scared of him, who deem him as despicable..."

    Yeah, I feel the same! But he has US. We all love him, don't we?

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  50. OMG. there are already three teasers for LSK volume 8, and i can't read them! i'm dying to know what they're about (esp. the third, since it's from sun's pov?).

    btw what language are the novels written in? i know the author is taiwanese.

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  51. Super random question, besides the manga, is there any other picture/image for Sun's sword somewhere?

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  52. Yeah, I feel the same! But he has US. We all love him, don't we?
    That's so true... I was getting to depressed over him not getting enough love... How silly of me :3

    OMG. there are already three teasers for LSK volume 8, and i can't read them! i'm dying to know what they're about (esp. the third, since it's from sun's pov?).

    btw what language are the novels written in? i know the author is taiwanese.

    I readed them hehe! with the crappy translation of google but stil... oh, and I was prety sure that the author is Chinese... did I get that one wrong?

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  53. You know I just thought of something does the Pope knows that Hell is Roland? I mean in the chappie where Sun wanted to bring Hell, the pope seemed to imply he knows whose Hell is. That aside, I really want Judge to tell Hell, I could just imagine the comical situation when Hell follows Sun 24/7!

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  54. I bow down to your awesome skills! I love this blog! Please please please update soon!

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  55. I praise the God of Light for his benevolence, letting you translate so beautifully the chapters so far :3
    Thanks so much!

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    1. and i concur(: thank you sooo much haha i think sun is starting to become my bias rofl^^ CREUS SUN is truly a scary creature ><

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  56. Thank you so much for the translations I love reading LSK! I do feel a little sad about Creus's sight though...

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